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this is goddamn genius

lmao

The voices in this are way funnier than the ones in your older submissions. It's also nice to see you've included more animation in this too. The only big thing I think this can improve on is its length.

This episode being a minute long works alright and it's long enough to flesh out the gag, but it would be cool to see you make more longer episodes.

TheViber responds:

Haha, thanks, I appreciate it!

perfection

The art in this is pretty good, and it's not a bad first attempt at a movie, but it's still incredibly short and not much happens throughout it. I don't think the score should be as close as it is to the top rated thing in the portal.

I think you could've improved boyfriend's burst of excitement by adding a sound effect when it happens, also I thought his facial expression was slightly odd, since he looked more suddenly content than excited.

pepperly responds:

All fair points; I'm honestly shocked the rating is as high as it is. I just wanted to take a couple evenings to join in the festivities with a small submission. I feel like I did a fair job with the short time I had to work with and how little I knew about what I was doing. There's definitely a few things I'd change overall if I had had more time, but in the end I think I did exactly what I had aimed to do.

Maybe in the future I'll submit something with a little more pizzazz, who knows?

It's very well done but it just feels lame to watch it when the art's in such an early state, since it makes a lot of scenes feel static/lifeless and sort of boring. If it was completed I'd probably give this 4.5/5.

CelestOrion responds:

Part of the reason we decided to upload the scene was to help bring awareness to the animation project and try to network out and hopefully find new animators to join in. Thanks for watching, though!

nice expressions lol

StupidCartoonz responds:

Thank you at least someone appreciates the effort I put into this

Overall it's an okay movie.

I think you guys were trying to go for an abstract feel by using a bunch of different art styles, but I think it just ended up looking sloppy because some parts look undetailed, like the part where the boyfriend runs away. I think it worked well for the monster though, since it had a lot more detail and made it a little creepier.

My last critique is that the movie was really short and would've probably been more interesting if there was more foreshadowing and a longer build up.

Not much going on in this movie. Good lip syncing and facial expressions though.

I like the DIY style this has, though the camera keeps getting blurry which is a bit annoying. The part at 3:43 was weird to me. If you used hands to move the track, or kept cutting to different frames like stop motion, it would have looked better.

EdwardTheEngine responds:

I'm going to do this in the next episode, thank you for your feedback!

There's not much going on. Maybe add animation for the other instruments to make it more interesting. The colors were good though.

IDusky responds:

That was the idea, but I had some problems and at the end I left it like that.

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