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I think this was your funniest movie so far, but I wish there was more animation, and the intro felt too long.

The drawings themselves were messy at times also, because some lines weren't the same width as the ones they were right next to. If it was a little more polished, I would rate it 3.5 / 5.

TheViber responds:

Thank you for this comment, I appreciate every comment that you give. But about the animation part, it's an audio comic. Aka, a "photo story" it's not meant to have animation in it, yeah you can say it DOES have animation in it, but that's when something big is happening. Example, Marlo going on his phone (NOT AN ANIMATION)

Marlo's house exploding (AN ANIMATION PART)

But yeah, other than that. Thank you man, and peace.

I'm not trying to be unhelpful, but I just don't get it.

Wasn't that bad. Sometimes peoples' arms look to small/short and I feel like you could have made it a little longer somehow.

Also I see why you hate it, if it had my voice in it I would hate it too.

Octo responds:

lmao why did you watch this i warned you, fool

It was good, but it's too short and there's not much to look at.

I liked it when he punched that guy's face open

It looks promising. Your animation got better while still looking funny. The only problem is that Braden's lines are quiet.

TheViber responds:

Audio fucks up at times, but in actual episodes that I'm working on right now, the audio is just fine. Make sure check out my profile when it comes out, or you'll most likely just see me on your home page or some shit.

Peace.

It started off okay and then got pretty boring once the lady showed up. The feminist joke was bland and made little sense. The facial expressions are a little better than the ones in your other animations, but the voice acting and jokes are worse.

Also what does that guy at the computer say at the beginning?

Bad

theend

Truly a work of art.

I make some games

Mark J. "Josh" Marvins James @Catalystl

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